Old timey pictures in profile seem to be trendy in a flash-in-the-pan-Instagram kind of way, so I was inspired to make this 19th century couple just for fun.
Cool pic. The hair on the girl is just out of the frame in back. It might look cool that way but I see the line for the frame edge in the hair. If you fix that line or stop her hair right at it it might look better. You might also try bringing the hair next to the mans jaw line a smidge further front to fix the look of the jaw. Just some ideas.